Children's Book: Edited Pages

 

I changed the gradient underneath the text to be extended across the page the make it look more natural. I also added shading on the back of the orangutan. I think adding more shading has given the illustration dimension. 

On this page I decided to take out some plants on the right page to make the text clearer. I left the bush in place and I think it looks clear and it's easier to read. 

I took out the tree trunk on this page- similar to the page before, so that the text is more readable and clear. It looks more professional and draws your attention on the characters. 

On this page I made the Rhino a lighter colour. This is because on the following pages it also has a blue tint. 

I took out some of the foliage on this page to make it clear. Similar to the other pages. As I have said previously it looks so much better. 

I made the bushes next to Rhino a lighter yellow so that the ground didn't blend in with the water. It adds more contrast and brings out the Rhino on this page.  

I made the background brighter and added in more dimension between the ground and water. I think changing these aspects brings more attention to Tan and Rhino. 

I added in a white gradient on the illustration. to make it look like the sun is shining on the animals. By doing this it has made the illustration look happier.