Children's Book: Full Colour Illustrations (meant to be posted before finished pages)

This is a huge improvement made from my previous illustration I created for this page. I think this shows off the amount of devastation that has been caused by the rumbling. I also added a red circle and cross on to Tan's tree to show that it's the only one left. I think the tire tracks and the fade grass also looks effective too. 

In this illustration, I wanted to show Tan, Rhino and Hornbill working together and leaving behind the trap left for Hornbills prey. I like this because it shows that in this section there are still trees and vegetation around. It also uses bright colours to represent a hopeful feeling. 

Here's a full page spread. It looks effective and colourful. The perspective looks great. However, the colour of the water could be altered to look brighter. 

This illustration is exciting. However the tree in the background looks too distracting. I will need to add a gradient there to make it less messy. 

This is a great illustration. However towards the bottom it looks bare. I could fix this by adding in bushes to frame it.