Here are a few screenshots of my pages so far. I will make some alterations throughout. Such as spacing on a few pages.
Not sure about the illustration on the left. I might just change this to a bush, without the branch. This is because it is a bit harsh on the eyes.
Again, in this one the darkness looks like the ground is scorched. I think I should extended the gradient on to the other side with Tan.
This gradient doesn't look as bad. However, I could take out the trunk and the bush to make the wording, just a little bit clearer.
This perspective is completely off. the trunks in the foreground look way too big in comparison to the Rhino. I think I will take these out of the illustration altogether.
I made the water a brighter blue on this image. This was to complement Tans colouring and to contrast with the green grass.
The trees in the background look distracting. I will change this to make it look part of the illustration and not out of place,
On this page I added in a few bush in the corners to frame this final page. The gradient at the top might be too distracting. Also rhino doesn't have a tie on his horn so I will need to fix that too.
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